DOES THIS LOOK OK TO U?

[MARVEL7o7]

is it alright im only 12 no presure plz

@smilepunch@

 

[Doom Saber]

it does, though I think you should practice more. Honestly, it looks okay, but if you continue, you will get better.

[jjlecaros]

good start

[synch]

I don't see what age has to do with it really but thats pretty good, all I can do are stickmen if that

 

allso, wow LOL wolvie with a lighter

I don't think I've ever actauly seen any of the MU guys who smoke with a lighter on em now that I think about it

 

gambit uses his own power, & I think I've seen wolvie with a match but thats about it, pretty funny actually now that I think about it

Its kinda surprising that lighter companys like zippo have not tryed to cash in on this market heh

[She-Thing]

^Tobacco is whacko synch

 

Wow, MARVEL you marked nicely the anatomy of his body (look at those muscles!)... although I don't like the pose you put him in.

[synch]

You don't need to smoke to have a good lighter on ya, in fact in general its just an good idea, like a pocket knife ... just never know when they may come in handy...

[Cloud]

It looks pretty good~

Keep on drawing and i might buy ur 1st issue comic

[gth_09]

Not bad. It's better than what I can do. Keep practising.

[Guest Steve Rogers]

Pretty Impressive,

Is that Free hand? Your own design?

You seem to have a pretty good grasp of anatomy & muscle structure….

[bumblebee85]

i don't know, that looks pretty good to me!!

 

things i would change-his hands look a little to big, and the claws on his left hand look like they are coming out of his wrist a little bit!!

 

but like i said, that looks pretty darn good to me!!

[chase chaser]

is it alright im only 12 no presure plz

@smilepunch@

 

 

 

thats a great start

by the way, im 12 also!

[Skips]

Pretty good work!

[pweagle]

that's good for your age reminds me of myself at that age, just try not to promote something like smoking. Tell you what you do, at twelve your just starting and if your really interesed at this drawing deal then remember what I tell you. When you are able to just think of something off the top of you head and create it, its the most challenging yet rewarding ability anyone can have. If it wasn't for drawing I would have never got through school, yeah cuz that all i thought about was drawing and the teachers knew that they could use it to my advantage. now your good but later on you could be great kid keep up the good work.

 

and dont give into "how to draw" books you gotta learn the hard way, like me hehehheheheh......

[OB1Killa]

Since your 12...it's aight....

But if your 21 its COOL!!

[Glaken]

Great start M7o7. Here's a couple of suggestions. Vary line width. Look at comic artists you like and you'll see that lines vary in width to give the character weight. This makes a BIG difference in the appearance of a piece of art. Also, study shadow's & light sources... if he's got a strong light source in front of him ... like a lighter... he would have more detail towards the lighter and less as it gets to the darker areas. This will give mood to the picture.

 

KEEP DRAWING... and don't be afraid to copy other artwork from out of comics and try to replicate them because that will help you learn to vary line, vary shadows etc... By copying others, it will help you learn and you can apply what you learn to your original work.

[Marvel_Joe_Spider]

Man for 12 yrs. old that is very good man. Keep going with it

[kreyonkid]

Good Stuff!!

[slao]

It is certainly better than anything i could draw, but as long as you keep working on it, you'll only get better. I think it looks good.

[Zeno]

I don't see what age has to do with it really but thats pretty good, all I can do are stickmen if that

 

allso, wow LOL wolvie with a lighter

I don't think I've ever actauly seen any of the MU guys who smoke with a lighter on em now that I think about it

 

gambit uses his own power, & I think I've seen wolvie with a match but thats about it, pretty funny actually now that I think about it

Its kinda surprising that lighter companys like zippo have not tryed to cash in on this market heh

 

Actually Wolvie got into a bunch of $%it in the savage land just trying to find the lighter Fury gave em, I think it was called Jungle tales or some such lol.

[She-Thing]

Great start M7o7. Here's a couple of suggestions. Vary line width. Look at comic artists you like and you'll see that lines vary in width to give the character weight. This makes a BIG difference in the appearance of a piece of art. Also, study shadow's & light sources... if he's got a strong light source in front of him ... like a lighter... he would have more detail towards the lighter and less as it gets to the darker areas. This will give mood to the picture.

 

KEEP DRAWING... and don't be afraid to copy other artwork from out of comics and try to replicate them because that will help you learn to vary line, vary shadows etc... By copying others, it will help you learn and you can apply what you learn to your original work.

 

Listen to him!!! He knows what he's saying. At your age I drew like an @$$ so I decided to look at other artists I liked, e.g Bruce Timm (he's one of the masters imo) & Adam Kubert. Then I drew things from Mike Mignola, and learned lots on body anatomy + ilumination. Thanks to this my art skills are quite a pass in my future art A-level.

And most importantly, like many people in here said... KEEP PRACTISING/DRAWING

[Def Scythe]

Since you have a scanner I would recomend you scan is as a .bmp and also as lineart (just black and white). You'll be able to color it with MS paint.

 

 

[Van Flyheit]

actually, age IS a factor. that is really good for a 12 year-old. in fact, it's good for a 20 year-old.

 

as for the smoking "controversy", don't let anyone censor you. art is about depicting realism and your emotions in your medium. wolverine would smoke so you can draw him smoking. if we start restricting childrens' freedom to express themselves in art, then my god, what kind of hell will we end up in?

[Bespin refugee]

Great start M7o7. Here's a couple of suggestions. Vary line width. Look at comic artists you like and you'll see that lines vary in width to give the character weight. This makes a BIG difference in the appearance of a piece of art. Also, study shadow's & light sources... if he's got a strong light source in front of him ... like a lighter... he would have more detail towards the lighter and less as it gets to the darker areas. This will give mood to the picture.

 

KEEP DRAWING... and don't be afraid to copy other artwork from out of comics and try to replicate them because that will help you learn to vary line, vary shadows etc... By copying others, it will help you learn and you can apply what you learn to your original work.

 

Listen to him!!! He knows what he's saying. At your age I drew like an @$$ so I decided to look at other artists I liked, e.g Bruce Timm (he's one of the masters imo) & Adam Kubert. Then I drew things from Mike Mignola, and learned lots on body anatomy + ilumination. Thanks to this my art skills are quite a pass in my future art A-level.

And most importantly, like many people in here said... KEEP PRACTISING/DRAWING

I would also suggest studying the basics (anatomy, proportions, etc...) from the dreaded 'how to draw books'; you need to understand the basics to avoid any 'mistakes'.

 

That said, I remember what my work looked like at age 12 (or, for that matter, 13, 14, 15...), and I'm really impressed.

[Glaken]

Here's a QUICK example of line variance. I just quickly traced your lines to vary them a little bit. I didn't get into shading or shadows but the line width is varied a little to give it a little more weight.

 

As for wolvie's smoking... even he, in the comics has told Kitty not to do it. He's got a healing factor and can't get cancer.

 

[Van Flyheit]

Here's a QUICK example of line variance. I just quickly traced your lines to vary them a little bit. I didn't get into shading or shadows but the line width is varied a little to give it a little more weight.

As for wolvie's smoking... even he, in the comics has told Kitty not to do it. He's got a healing factor and can't get cancer.

 

do i have to say it? ok, i'll say it. kids, don't smoke. there, i said it.

 

but we're not talking about kids smoking. the kid drew a pic. don't censor him.