A Rots Tale.

[Lady Jaye]

Epilogue: Order 66 has been given, and Aayla returned to Corusant in hopes of reuniting with the Jedi. Unfrotunately she finds the Jedi Temple in ruins, and no sign of Jedi, alive at least. She makes her way to escape in order to mount a offensive of some kind.

 

 

I've got to get down and reach my ship before I am discovered.

 

 

 

Unfortunately she does not see the Senate Guards have come to intercept Aayla

 

 

 

Noooo

 

 

 

Hands up!

[Lady Jaye]

You too have turned on the Jedi?

 

 

 

No my lady, we have not.

 

 

 

I don't get it.

 

 

 

We saw you coming down, and moved to intercept. We had to draw on you to make sure no one was following you and would see us helping you.

 

 

 

But why?

 

 

 

We are not Clones my lady, thus are able to question what goes around us

 

 

 

General, we are loyal to the Senate and the Jedi. What the Senate is now, is a travesty of what we used to serve.

 

 

 

We will help you.....

[Lady Jaye]

What was that? Sounds like we have been discovered!

 

 

 

I'm afraid my lady that we will not be able to help you as much as we wanted.

 

 

 

You must go now, we will hold them off.

 

 

 

No I will not let you sacrifice yourself to help me, we fight...

 

 

 

Our lives are to protect the Senate, we will do that by keeping you alive. You must go.

 

 

 

Now go now!

 

 

 

Thank you....

[Lady Jaye]

Halt!!!

 

 

 

Where did they go traitors?

 

 

 

That's not your concern, turn away now.

 

 

 

I don't think ....Fire!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Go find her, do not let her escape! Dead or alive, she must be brought back!

 

 

 

Nooo..you can't.

 

 

 

She's no longer your concern.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Epilogue: And so two valient Senate Guards give their lives so that one Jedi may live, so that hope may continue. Hope to restore freedom to the Galaxy.

 

FIN

[fred]

that was very interesting.but the fact is she was unloaded on felucia.

[Lady Jaye]

Okay can someone give Captain obvious a hand!!

 

Umm it's the way I would have shot the scene/movie!!! You're talking to someone who saw it opening night, and then some. Plus I'm a mod at the star wars site. Forgive me being kert, it's just that I worked long on it. Anyhow it's just a what if story or better yet, a what could have been story!!

[fred]

i know its a pretty cool little story and...........never mind.

[wolvie]

thats cool jaye! better than seeing her just die . Good work

[fred]

thats cool jaye! better than seeing her just die . Good work

same here but i still liked watching the jedi get unloaded on.

[Neocaledonian]

Nice work. I like this alternate version better.

[Classic]

Haha, bravo!! A nicely planned sequence Lady Jaye!! Will you be adding to the story, or have other small stories to post?

[amd098]

i prefered this to her gettin shot in the back

nice work

[Wandye]

cool story, great work, good to see people having fun, but still i loved watching her get smoked from behind.

[fred]

but still i loved watching her get smoked from behind.

@loll@ @firedevil@ @smilepunch@

[obiprime]

Awesome. It makes sense that the blue guards be loyal to the Jedi. It would explain why they dissapear.

[Wheeljack35]

Nice job that was cool

[jasonkimberson]

Clones bag two more losers

 

 

HURRAY!!!!!

[DPrime]

Cool - I'd like to see this happen in the upcoming series... not with Aayla, obviously, but it's interesting that the Senate guards may not blindly follow the Emperor...

[Blix]

That was pretty good.

I liked when Aayla secura was smoked from behind though.

[Dark Goji Lord]

Aayla deserved what she got.

[SentinelPrime]

RAther or not I would change ROTS, that is frakkin' awesome. It's hilarious and extremely cool at the same time...

[RatWithWings]

That is awesome Lady Jaye, good work.

 

I definatly we had a scene like this for Aayla and all the other Jedi for that matter in the movie. I know the Jedi had to die, but it would have been cool if they put up more of a fight.

[Lady Jaye]

Thanks guys. For those that asked, I will do at least one more, if not two, a sort of Trilogy if you will!!!

 

@loll@

[Matthew Green]

Can I get to be Captain Obvious next time?

[JoeRhyno]

Aayla deserved what she got.

so did Ki Adi @loll@